Hello everyone, today, I would like to post a story that I started and other people finished off for me.
It was a dark stormy night, when a detective got a case where a girl was killed during her way back home from her academy. The witness said that she was looking out the window and saw a tall women walking behind the girl and when she went to the bathroom there was a scream and when she looked out, both two people were gone. She was frightened. She thougt that she had to call the police. This is how the detective got the case. However, the bathroom was locked when the police and the detective came. There was no windows, but only one spave through a ventilating opening. Nothing seemed strange with the floor. But after some time passed \, the detective recognized that the tiles of the bathroom floor was new. Others were all old. The detective thought harder. He got one idea to make sure 'Someone who made this case changed tiles to make the police to not recognizewho he or she is.' He wop up the tiles and guess what he sees. The body of the girl. He caught the witness. She had the wrong truth.She had made a team with the crimminal.
When the detective was in a bar to rest a minute, there was another case. A boy was also killed in a bathrom too. And it was a same bathroom that the girl had been dead. He thought that something was wrong when he went to the ventilating machine. It was not working and when he ran his hands over it something was caught. It was a secret button on one of the bars of the ventilating machine. He then gathered up some special group and pushed the button. And suddenly, it swung open reveal a secret passage way. They went through the tunnel to find a very tall women holding a desert eagle in one hand and she was examining some money. (Bank accounts.) and there were a lot of criminals waiting to be found.
The End
This was not the way I actually wanted the story to lay out. But, it was nice to know what other people think about!
Kind of fun, isn't it? This is a good story. A bit like CSI.
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